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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 20, 2009 8:20:05 GMT -6
2nd RP posted.....
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Post by adm on Mar 20, 2009 8:29:32 GMT -6
it was very good, but every time I see Hear when it's supposed to be here or there when it's supposed to be their god...I wanna put on my Grammar Nazi costume and go rampaging through the forums!
But Zane talking to a homeless old fart bout life? I wonder who the homeless old fart could be...HAROLD YOUR DAD IS IN NYC!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 20, 2009 10:42:51 GMT -6
He wasn't homeless......even said he WENT HOME.....
Try talking to the older generation sometime. They sometimes don't have a lot to say, but what they say could open your eyes to some fascinating realities.
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Post by adm on Mar 20, 2009 11:18:08 GMT -6
He wasn't homeless......even said he WENT HOME..... Try talking to the older generation sometime. They sometimes don't have a lot to say, but what they say could open your eyes to some fascinating realities. Woops...mis-read that part. But yeah, I like talking to my great-grandma when I'm home. She's 85 years old...she's one cool old lady. Even cooler cuz she keeps telling me to "Sow my wild oats". But she also has explained how it could be a lot worse right now...she was born/raised in Great Depression, so she knows how to live on potatoes and mac and cheese.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 21, 2009 10:36:37 GMT -6
Taking the paycut that I did last year, my family has learned to live on Mac and Cheese, and Hamburger helper.....when we can afford the Hamburger meat! LOL
But I can teach my kids that it's not about what we have or don't have, as long as we are together as a family. That is more important than anything else I can teach them as long as I live.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 21, 2009 11:41:11 GMT -6
Final RP
"Into the Darkness"
Is posted. Harold challeneged Jimmy to go where he doesn't want to go to beat him......
So...
comments? suggestions?
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Post by Maniac on Mar 21, 2009 14:42:54 GMT -6
I Really liked the second one allot. Probably one of my favorites by you yet, it was just all around good. It had everything an rp needed. The third one was the basic set up, setting, talking, fade, but it got the emotion across that Jimmy was feeling. Overall, you and Harold have made this match a very tough match to pick a winner in and both of you are putting out some your best or better work this week.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 24, 2009 12:13:43 GMT -6
First RP of the week up....
You know the drill
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 15, 2009 10:49:11 GMT -6
First roleplay since my return is posted.....as always, thoughts, suggestions, etc...are welcome.
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Post by adm on Jul 15, 2009 11:24:03 GMT -6
Good stuff, hell there's a lot of GREAT STUFF in this new promo...but the only problem I have is you seem to have TOO MUCH in it. this one rp could have been split into a devo rp and the promo or into two separate promos for the match. It was great...but it just started to drag, you had a lot to say from how long you were gone...but indeed not all of it applied to the match...you spent probably too much time dawdling on the stable you and Gib and Mac are in at the beginning, rambling off humorous messages left and the whole butler prepared your house thing.
Next one, I hope, will be shorter, as I said, you said a LOT of good and important things, just putting it all in one rp may not be advised for the future.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 17, 2009 8:41:53 GMT -6
2nd RP posted..... Feed My Back!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 20, 2009 15:54:22 GMT -6
First RP this week for Collision posted......feed my back.....
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 21, 2009 14:01:55 GMT -6
DevelopMENTAL posted...trying a new style....
thoughts?
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 23, 2009 15:21:10 GMT -6
last Collision RP posted....
trying out something new....
Good luck to Falcon...I am sure they will be deliberating in the staff room on Sunday! LOL
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Post by adm on Jul 23, 2009 16:06:43 GMT -6
Better than the first, though the new style still needs some work...could shorten some of his in-head stuff here and there, but it definitely could work long-run for you. So good job
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Post by Maniac on Jul 24, 2009 22:28:04 GMT -6
My only real problem is, Jimmy Zane... I guess imagined his friend, Thomas, and there for he has to go to a therapist? In the rp you insinuate this has been happening for a while, but it only happened once, and for all we know, there may he been someone in the house Boswell just didn't see, so Zane could be fine.
People going crazy from head injuries is a cool story, but it just seems like this one was a little rushed and forced, like you want us to believe Jimmy is crazy when in fact Boswell may just be a terrible butler.
On a side note, the humor sort of throws the whole "is Jimmy crazy?" off. I'm not sure how to explain it, but they didn't quite blend together for me. It was like reading two different rps ideas that you meshed together because they were both too good to throw out.
With a little more fleshing out this story could be really awesome. I suggest you check out all my Angel rps leading into Picture Perfect when Angel was conversing with ghosts on a regular basis for inspiration.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 27, 2009 11:43:49 GMT -6
The old Jimmy Zane is back....I think...
Thoughts? Suggestions?
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 27, 2009 12:21:51 GMT -6
Ok....you asked for some feedback and it's time for honesty.
I hated it.
The two paragraph promo was ok, but with three other people in the match especially the calibre of those opponents you could have written a lot more.
As for the whole brown eye/gib crap, what the hell were you thinking? Was it supposed to be funny? Is it a piss take of a famous novel or something? I just don't get it, it felt wrong and really served absolutley no purpose towards the roleplay other than to turn a two paragraph roleplay into a far too long one.
I'm sorry Wil, I think your an amazing roleplayer and I've seen you **** gold before, but this? I dunno...it's bad man...
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Post by Gib on Jul 27, 2009 13:45:39 GMT -6
hehehe... I laughed out loud. I think it was genius. It is nice for someone to try something new as opposed to the "I am better, I will win" plus profanity promos I have witnessed from people lately.
I say kudos for trying something different, character development is a plus when you are trying to bring a humorous side to your character back.
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Post by scab on Jul 27, 2009 20:38:11 GMT -6
Wil, you were correct in your prediction. I got half way through the rp and was immediately repulsed at what I read. There was really no purpose for wasting half of what could have been a great rp with that.. It is the 2nd anniversary for nCw...and you wrote that. I believe you guys refer to it as "toilet humor" but I call it anal humor and there is really no need for it. I've seen you kick major ass with The Punisher and Jimmy Zane and had no use for the anal humor. You can be funny and show Zane's humorous side WITHOUT having to sneak a peek of an old man milkin his worm. Really? It is my opinion that toilet humor/anal humor rps are complete trash.
"The VooDoo Child" is a pervert who enjoys watching old men whack off in their beds. I guess that's your new gimmick now? I don't know if the staff wants a character like this here, but it is really disgusting. I REALLY hope you do not expect to WIN MATCHES with that kind of rping style, do you? I am trying to read as many rps here as I possibly can and give them feedback out of respect, but I can't respect trash like that. I'd delete the rp and come up with something that has some class in it...then I'll delete my feedback and re-write something new.
Edit: I almost forgot to say something positive about the rp. It is long, and you mentioned your opponents which is good. And you had good character development.
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Post by Keybo Shabaz on Jul 27, 2009 21:06:10 GMT -6
I honestly don't know what to make of it. I mean, I get the whole spoof thing. But the only mental picture this brings up is Zane standing in a room, staring at Gib hunched over, his ass out, whackin off. I don't know how I was supposed to find humor in this, but I didn't. Maybe it's just me then?
I mean, I tried to give it a fair shake, but I just don't know with this one dude.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 27, 2009 21:25:16 GMT -6
Since when did people who don't even RP here....or not on staff here.... have any business leaving feedback
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 28, 2009 14:57:38 GMT -6
Last Collision RP posted
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Post by scab on Jul 28, 2009 15:24:26 GMT -6
*THROWS FIST IN THE AIR* HELL YEAH!!!! That's what I am talking about, way to come back! You had a few typing mistakes, but the content was incredible, the emotion was amazing, and THAT'S who Jimmy Zane is!!! Remember what I said Wil, you never change your style to be like somebody else and think that's what you gotta do to get a few votes. You work to IMPROVE YOUR OWN STYLE....the staff here that vote respect all styles and has a deep understanding of them. I can respect ALL rping styles the rpers here do, and by you sticking to your own style and working to improve it is you showing them respect as well. You have another Zane rp in you for this week, I know you do...looking forward to reading it.
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Jul 28, 2009 15:28:04 GMT -6
That second one is the kind of Jimmy Zane I fear...
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 3, 2009 11:17:47 GMT -6
First Fallout RP posted "FOCUS"
Thoughts?
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 4, 2009 12:42:16 GMT -6
2nd PPV RP posted... Enjoy
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Post by adm on Aug 4, 2009 14:56:36 GMT -6
The image was hilarious, a little long, but pretty overall solid and funny. Interesting...very interesting.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 6, 2009 17:44:28 GMT -6
Final Fallout RP posted......thoughts?
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 12, 2009 12:58:37 GMT -6
First RP of the week posted
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