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Post by Deleted on Jun 25, 2011 19:32:43 GMT -6
A good 2nd RP there Jenny, its only real downside was that there wasn't more of it! I love reading about Roxxxie's life and always enjoy the RPs you put together.
The grammar was much improved this time, I don't think I spotted any massive errors or anything. The colour still definately helps break things up, I am glad you incorporated it a while back.
It will be a shame once this feud ends, you two bounce off of each other really really well and I will watch both your "careers" with great interest still.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jul 14, 2011 13:49:04 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2011 8:05:11 GMT -6
Good return RP Jenny, looks like the break has done you some good. Good work!
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Post by Pooler on Jul 15, 2011 13:46:59 GMT -6
amazing what a little break will do ya! This was a stellar read and I almost feel like taking a back seat and letting you and Alysson go at it! Great, great work and I'm looking forward to seeing how this all shapes up in the end
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jul 22, 2011 6:39:46 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jul 22, 2011 9:43:43 GMT -6
Very, very good RP this week Jenny.
It was well structured, flowed and was engaging for the reader. It clearly demonstrates that you are capable of some excellent work and I hope that you keep this in mind when you suffer from writers block.
Great work.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jul 22, 2011 9:51:44 GMT -6
Thank you Roberto.
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Post by Mercedes Vargas on Jul 23, 2011 17:00:30 GMT -6
Great job on your latest RP, Jenny. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Now let's see what Todd does with Stephanie for this fatal four-way.
Good luck this week.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Aug 6, 2011 6:07:41 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Aug 6, 2011 16:56:51 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Aug 13, 2011 4:02:12 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Aug 20, 2011 8:46:01 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Sept 9, 2011 10:13:51 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Sept 17, 2011 9:52:41 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Sept 23, 2011 10:37:27 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2011 10:59:22 GMT -6
Pretty good RP, lots of character development which is always good. Good work Miss Marshall.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Sept 25, 2011 3:50:36 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2011 8:46:25 GMT -6
Amy is certainly back to her best. I like the style of writing and the layout, it flows fairly well and hits all the right notes. Good set of RPs for the PPV.
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Post by Mercedes Vargas on Sept 25, 2011 11:10:45 GMT -6
Well said. Jenny, you've shown an 180 degree turn with Amy Marshall (the wrestler formerly known as Roxxxie), and week after week, you're getting better and better. (And it doesn't hurt to have your own catchphrase, lol)
This is the best I've seen so far, and it should be interesting to see where Amy goes from here. Perhaps we'll see her return to the grand stange in the division again and see her receive another title shot in future? The sky is the limit.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Oct 1, 2011 16:57:28 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Oct 8, 2011 9:36:14 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Oct 8, 2011 14:45:17 GMT -6
I like the format of your RPs Jenny, think they suit Amy well. You've imrpvoed a lot and got into a good groove, you should be very happy with how you've done.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Oct 15, 2011 8:48:57 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Oct 22, 2011 16:42:43 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Oct 30, 2011 5:34:50 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Nov 9, 2011 17:28:26 GMT -6
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Post by Crystal Williams on Nov 9, 2011 21:29:01 GMT -6
Jenny... wow... I normally don't do this but what a great rp you wrote here. It was simply excellent. The anger, the frustration led you to write a wonderful rp... You are kind of like me, when i am upset i write like never before, and this rp was a really great refresher. Keep this up, this is what i want to see from you...
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Post by Amy Marshall on Nov 11, 2011 16:54:46 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Nov 19, 2011 18:18:23 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Nov 26, 2011 5:14:25 GMT -6
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