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Post by Amy Marshall on Dec 11, 2010 12:36:08 GMT -6
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Post by Ander Carvetti on Dec 12, 2010 20:36:35 GMT -6
<3.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Dec 18, 2010 7:45:39 GMT -6
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Post by Steven Luke on Dec 19, 2010 15:54:33 GMT -6
Really liked the story telling part of your last RP. I think you need just a little more promoing mixed in and you'll be going big places
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Post by Roxxxie on Dec 25, 2010 5:47:28 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Dec 31, 2010 11:42:05 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jan 15, 2011 10:08:02 GMT -6
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Post by Steven Luke on Jan 15, 2011 10:55:52 GMT -6
I know you're down on your rping this week but I think you did an awesome job. The devo stuff about how your character was feeling and what she's thinking was great. The priming could've been better but it wasn't bad in my opinion
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jan 22, 2011 10:19:01 GMT -6
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Post by Trent Helms on Jan 23, 2011 0:53:53 GMT -6
I'm going to be honest This is the first to I read by you and while it was short it does look like it could lead somewhere
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jan 26, 2011 12:44:36 GMT -6
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Post by Steven Luke on Jan 26, 2011 12:57:04 GMT -6
Who are you facing this week? No offense to the RP itself because it was really good, but it belonged in the Devo section IMO. I had to look it up just to see what match you were in and that RP was a big let down for a Woman's Number One contender match. I was really hoping for a Trish/Roxxxie match at the PPV but that RP isn't going to win number one contenders matches. You've got character development down, you need to work on getting some promo work into your RPs if you really want to contend like for the Woman's Championship like I think you should
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Post by Shane Hunt on Jan 26, 2011 13:05:11 GMT -6
Sorry Jenny, but I agree with Venom. He's said all I was going to say before I read his post.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jan 29, 2011 10:19:23 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Feb 5, 2011 8:58:44 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Feb 12, 2011 10:49:40 GMT -6
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Post by Shane Hunt on Feb 12, 2011 11:54:19 GMT -6
I didn't enjoy it. It wasn't to do with the length. You just seemed to repeat the same thing two or three times, and it became quite boring. It doesn't seem like you proof read the RP either.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Feb 17, 2011 14:12:02 GMT -6
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Post by Paul Star on Feb 17, 2011 15:02:09 GMT -6
Your last RP was very well written. I enjoyed reading it, especially because it had boob!
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Post by destroyyou555 on Feb 18, 2011 0:38:38 GMT -6
Good job, now we need play by play done by Morgan Freeman
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Post by Trish Newborn on Feb 20, 2011 5:12:52 GMT -6
I liked your rp this week and thought I'd leave some feedback. I'm glad you didn't struggle with this like I said to you on AIM it's good. I liked the whole interaction with Trent, lol. Good job.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Feb 20, 2011 6:01:21 GMT -6
Thanks guys...
Should be fun trying to top this week.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Feb 25, 2011 14:20:04 GMT -6
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Post by Simon Daye on Feb 25, 2011 14:55:02 GMT -6
I know you said you didn't like it on the boards, but I thought it was good. It showed a lot of focus I thought and was a good read.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Feb 25, 2011 15:00:23 GMT -6
Thanks.
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Post by Steven Luke on Feb 26, 2011 1:17:28 GMT -6
Trish seems to bring out the best in you. Bravo on a really good rp
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Post by Amy Marshall on Feb 26, 2011 15:54:54 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Mar 4, 2011 18:11:22 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Mar 4, 2011 20:31:45 GMT -6
Asides from some grammatical errors I thought it was a good RP post-title victory.
I think it would look better with a bit of colour, just to draw attention to the sections of speech and for purely aesthetic reasons.
But, content wise, I thought it was a good read.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Mar 11, 2011 15:36:51 GMT -6
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