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Post by Amy Marshall on Dec 3, 2011 17:58:43 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jan 7, 2012 11:31:44 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jan 14, 2012 13:42:01 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2012 15:44:09 GMT -6
Aggression is always a nice touch when it works and it is good to see that Ander leaving wasn't just ignored like some exits can be.
Good RP.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jan 14, 2012 15:45:21 GMT -6
Thank ya.
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Post by Lionheart on Jan 15, 2012 7:11:27 GMT -6
Just read your last rp, I thought it was good, you seem to know what you're doing with the promo cutting but what I would change is the descriptive part of your CD. It isn't always necessary to say "he suggested", "she implied" etc. Let the words and the actions tell the reader in what way the character is speaking. In particular I would avoid using "said". The most important thing in the RP is flow. You want it to read easy and flow well - saying "he said/she said" interrupts the flow a little and is unnecessary anyway as we already know they are saying something.
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jan 21, 2012 18:54:50 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jun 15, 2012 17:30:42 GMT -6
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Post by Amy Marshall on Jun 17, 2012 9:11:01 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2012 13:41:44 GMT -6
Jenny, I will say this as some feedback.
I think quality wise your RPs are ok, what I often think they are lacking are self-belief. I've seen you produce some very good RPs, but you're always worrying too much about the standard that I think you hold back at times. I think if you got a bit more belief in your ability you could have a really dominant run and the quality of your RPs would improve substantially as whilst they are good I always feel you're holding back a little and you do not instill belief in yourself often enough.
This isn't meant as a dig, what I mean is I think you need to believe in your ability to be one of the better Starlet RPers more often as I think the results would be very good.
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