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Post by Trish Newborn on Apr 17, 2011 17:20:37 GMT -6
Roberto, your last ppv role-play was really good. It was straight to the point on addressing Todd Williams, but also digs deeper into who Roberto is. The RP had some really nice back and forth conversation parts between Hannah and Roberto that was a good touch. I enjoyed it.
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Post by Trent Helms on Apr 17, 2011 19:02:33 GMT -6
You are quickly becoming one of my favorite new members of this fed.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 17, 2011 19:04:59 GMT -6
Glad to hear you enjoyed it, I held back on "bringing Hannah" in but felt now was the right time to start giving Roberto some other characters to bounce off of, as opposed to just cracking clever remarks. So I am really glad to hear that the back and forths were believable and enjoyable to read!
EDIT - And a very big thank you Dante, I am very flattered to hear that!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2011 21:51:30 GMT -6
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Post by Spike Kane on Apr 23, 2011 4:12:56 GMT -6
Hey there, not a bad RP at all. I liked the split between people/events and the outright promo which seems to have become the norm nowadays. I like the character of Roberto, a good heel that sees things the way he wants to rather than actuality. I'd just recommend reading up on your opponents a little more next time.
Good luck amigo.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 23, 2011 8:40:04 GMT -6
Noted, I admit the ending was the hardest part to actually write this week.
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Post by Trish Newborn on May 8, 2011 16:33:18 GMT -6
I liked it though the segments seemed a little short, and the promo had moments where it needed to be broken up more. Other than that it was a good rp.
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Post by Deleted on May 21, 2011 22:28:03 GMT -6
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Post by Trish Newborn on May 22, 2011 12:50:34 GMT -6
I enjoyed them Roberto, I always like the interaction you do with your characters and follow it up with smack talking down your opponents. You used Trish in a great way. And hey, who doesn't love a good crime story about law enforcement. It's one of my favorite things to watch, and read about. Good job on the pay-per-view.
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Post by doc on Jun 19, 2011 0:35:30 GMT -6
Both of you kicked ass this week nice work
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Post by Alexis Morrison on Jun 19, 2011 15:48:18 GMT -6
I agree with Doc, I thought the presentations was well done. You two work well in the tag team division for us, and I think it should continue in my opinion. I know me saying us when I'm not using Trish is kinda weird, lol. Your rp was very solid and well told, I still enjoy reading about Hannah and her interaction with Roberto. It just doesn't get old. And then, you bashed the hell out of Doc and Jone, solid work indeed. Good job Roberto!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 25, 2011 19:27:12 GMT -6
Part III of III of "In the beginning". Now it should all flow. ncw2k7rp.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=ppv&thread=16845These are perhaps the RPs I am most proud of since I joined NCW, they really explain a lot about Hannah and Roberto's "back story", although there is more to tell and hopefully it is a good example of what Roberto used to be like in the past, against the backdrop of his upcoming match. I'd be really grateful for some feedback on these 3 RPs guys.
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Post by Trent Helms on Jun 26, 2011 10:26:53 GMT -6
I felt you really did a good job this week...
I offer you this brownie, I don't know where I got it from, but you can have it.
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Post by Deleted on Jun 26, 2011 13:53:30 GMT -6
I will graciously accept your gift and hide all evidence swiftly lest its real owner re-appears. It is mine now!
Thanks for the feedback, if anybody else has any more please let me know!
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Post by Trish Newborn on Jun 26, 2011 15:38:24 GMT -6
Your third rp was really good Roberto, I liked it. I thought it was a good way to end the three rp series you placed. I hope it continues
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Post by doc on Jul 4, 2011 3:25:48 GMT -6
Just caught up with your rp, it was the sickness
I think we all know robbie v is the future
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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2011 7:31:37 GMT -6
Thank you Doc, I am very flattered!
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Post by doc on Jul 7, 2011 12:33:47 GMT -6
Loved the part at the start, liked how you done something different with the way you broke the rp up, promo parts good as usual, and you didn't mind stepping up and rping first for your team. All round great job
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Post by adm on Jul 8, 2011 9:15:50 GMT -6
Verona, where have you been all my life as a tag partner? You're awesome. Good job, liked the use of the English Language against people. Viva La Revolution!
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