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Post by Spike Kane on Feb 12, 2008 18:48:58 GMT -6
Rp: Common Enemies, Common Goals
posted. I thought the opening was rather powerful myself.
Feedback appreciated.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 12, 2008 19:05:17 GMT -6
Just finished reading it dude.
*Applauds*
Well done, it was indeed a powerful introduction. Your last few roleplays with Milo involved seemed like Spike had gone a bit soft, lost his ruthless streak. And it was a nice change to what I've come to expect, but, why fix what isn't broken? Although they were entertaining roleplays, you produce stronger roleplays in this style I feel.
Reminded me of you're roleplays when you first arrived here, especially during our first feud.
Now critique. I didn't like Carly being protrayed as a dumb blonde lol, it didn't work for me. If you were trying to protray that she was annoying Spike, then it worked because she also annoyed me lol. I think it was the fact that others who have used her in their roleplays have made her literate, and intelligent. I'm used to that, so seeing her turned into a dumb teenage character didn't seem right lol.
Other than that I couldn't fault that roleplay. I'll start mine tomorrow, and hopefully finish it, if not it'll be up Thursday.
KUTGW
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Post by Spike Kane on Feb 12, 2008 19:42:09 GMT -6
rebuttle taken from the staff page, which shows I'm the only ****er who read it properly:
"She has a ditzy attitude, and seems to be guillable and seems to be always out of the loop when it comes to current events in the promotion."
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Post by msjsn3 on Feb 12, 2008 19:59:19 GMT -6
That is why I have not used her. I must be a fu**er cause I have read that also. Your rp was good. The beginning definite strong. Ending was good to. Over all a great rp....of course that is why you are the world Champion
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Post by Joe Everyman on Feb 12, 2008 22:05:28 GMT -6
Yeah, the rp was great. That's why I'll never beat you for a title. Also, "Like OH MY GOD, LANCE RYAN, WTF!? LOZLORz!?" Quote of the week, hands down
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Feb 13, 2008 4:02:30 GMT -6
rebuttle taken from the staff page, which shows I'm the only f**ker who read it properly: "She has a ditzy attitude, and seems to be guillable and seems to be always out of the loop when it comes to current events in the promotion." Apologies lol, in my defence I had no access to the main page in quite a while due to internet problems, I only went off what other people did with her lol.
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Post by tylerjacobs on Feb 13, 2008 6:03:54 GMT -6
Yeah I forgot about that dude.
Oh well, maybe people will use her properly now.
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Post by Spike Kane on Feb 28, 2008 15:14:26 GMT -6
First Soverign roleplay posted:
Alliances/A Champions Spirit/Broken
whadda you guys think? I enjoyed it myself, made me feel good about roleplaying.
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Post by recklessjack on Feb 29, 2008 9:39:09 GMT -6
I liked it quite a bit. Enjoyed how you split everything up into different sections instead of having it be one long continuous job. Seemed to flow better that way to be honest. Very good job "brother". Haha.
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Post by Spike Kane on Feb 29, 2008 13:18:39 GMT -6
Second rp up: Visions of Death/Loss/Plague.
Feedback GREATLY appreciated with this new angle I'm taking
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Post by recklessjack on Feb 29, 2008 13:31:37 GMT -6
I liked it quite a bit. Enjoyed how you split everything up into different sections instead of having it be one long continuous job. Seemed to flow better that way to be honest. Very good job "brother". Haha. x2
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Post by Lance "The Icon" Ryan on Feb 29, 2008 14:25:25 GMT -6
Very nice Spike, I like that you are taking everything in a new angle. It flowed nicely. great second roleplay man.
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Post by Spike Kane on Mar 1, 2008 17:14:47 GMT -6
Thanks Lance, Jack.
Third and final rp posted. The new angle is kinda there, but Frank makes no appearances because I wanna save that stuff for after the ppv.
Father and Son/Casualty of Society/TheBest Defence
feedback appreciated
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Mar 1, 2008 17:30:05 GMT -6
Best out of the three of them dude.
I'm gutted I haven't been able to give you and Lance the challenge you both deserve from me. I shall now forever be known as Davey Ortega's apprentice lol.
There isn't really anything to crit in your roleplays. You always pull out all the stops when it comes to these title defence's. Matches will go by with you involved and I'll think "Yeah, I can win this", then you and knock out a trilogy of roleplays like that and remind everyone why you are the champion.
All three were a delight to read and if anyone had anoy doubts that you aren't up to scratch on being our champion then I think these roleplays should put them to rest.
Again, apologies to you for my lack of roleplaying, this title match couldn't of come at a worser time for me. Sad thing is I only see myself becoming more busy as the final weeks approach *sigh*
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Post by Spike Kane on Mar 15, 2008 17:45:03 GMT -6
EPIPHANY FEEDBACK would be greatly appreciated for both myself and Mister Recklarse Jack.
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Post by Spike Kane on Mar 22, 2008 8:57:47 GMT -6
Two Collison rps posted.
The second: "Doomed to Repeat2 is the one I feel is strongest, but feedback for both, any, all etc would be greatly appreciated.
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Mar 22, 2008 9:00:30 GMT -6
S'all good man. KUTGW as Manson says so much.
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Post by Dante Cross on Apr 6, 2008 0:10:42 GMT -6
I'm so glad, you went back to being a heel, to be honest, You just seem like a natural heel, and I really couldn't buy you as a face, in my mind, when you were a face, the roleplays were good, except when dealing with your character, It was almost 2004 Randy Orton face run bad.
But overall the messages and the talking were good, but just so freakin glad you became Heel again.
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Post by Spike Kane on May 15, 2008 4:52:14 GMT -6
OMGz!!! Like a Spike roleplay has been posted in the first time since ages!!
Feedback for "Reborn" roleplay o in general would greatly be appreiciated amigos.
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Post by Angel on May 16, 2008 5:30:14 GMT -6
Cool Rp, makes me even more anxious to eventually face you.
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Post by Spike Kane on May 31, 2008 9:04:29 GMT -6
"Dark World" posted, I wanted to do a two part thing with this over the week but illness struck so...eh.
Please tell me what you think, was it too far fetched? Stupid? Etc.
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Post by msjsn3 on May 31, 2008 10:03:08 GMT -6
I thought Dark World was awesome! As usually you did an hell of a job!
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Post by Spike Kane on Jun 4, 2008 20:17:12 GMT -6
Fear or Respect posted.
I've been planning this all day since I watched Ironman in the cinema again...ok, well not all day as the movie ended at like 8.20 or something.
Thoughts?
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Post by Alex Jones on Jun 4, 2008 20:20:33 GMT -6
as usual you blow me out of the water...amazing spike....
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Post by adm on Jun 4, 2008 21:22:04 GMT -6
Spike talks a lot, but I'm sure you could probably give me a run for my money. Good stuff, definitely keep in Spike's character through the whole thing
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Post by Spike Kane on Jun 10, 2008 13:00:34 GMT -6
All in the Family posted.
(DP I'd just like to point something out, I accepted your challenge ages ago, and we didn't screw over Talon, SJ and Reckoning so Xavier could win, it was a six man tag)
anywho...pretty damn long one this...but eh...I think it's retty good.
(Btw I asked RJ if i could use the cut before I did)
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jun 10, 2008 13:51:33 GMT -6
Dude I loved it, enjoyed the main part to it and the development was a nice touch, if a little long, but that's my only gripe with it.
Other than that fantastic first roleplay.
Lmao@Jacky
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Post by Spike Kane on Jun 14, 2008 11:10:33 GMT -6
Second ppv roleplay up.
"All My Twisted Thoughts" yeah, I woulda done three but the fact that the Hollands hasn't roleplayed and is doing an old sandbagger made me put it off, but hey...what can I say?
I hope you guys like, and I would really appreciate some feedback.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jun 20, 2008 9:53:15 GMT -6
New rp. ncw2k7rp.proboards82.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=general&thread=3676&page=1"Unseen" posted. I had some "unseen footage" from Collision, to try and make sense as to why Spike's reaction wasn't on Collision, because if you've ever read my roleplays (and your a lying sack of **** if you say you have and don't know) Conrad Jones is a big part of Spike's character and past. So I felt I had to deal with it in this roleplay. So yeah, it's majority Character development. I'll try and get another one up tomorrow. thoughts, feedback? Constructive critisicm?
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Jun 20, 2008 11:26:03 GMT -6
It was great...but then I've always enjoyed Spike going off his nut, and I'm one of the few here who can fully appreciate it, knowing damn near all of his history...
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