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Post by Xavier Williams on Jun 20, 2008 13:30:51 GMT -6
Dude.... it was Picture Perfect, ya' know... the PPV... yeah
Other than that, awesome RP. And I like seeing a crazy Spike Kane... although i know nothing of his past.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 2, 2008 18:57:21 GMT -6
Hypocrite posted.
I kinda got carried away and when I saw it was 10 pages i thought I best stop and post the bastard.
So...thoughts and comments please.
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Post by Alex Jones on Jul 2, 2008 19:04:10 GMT -6
Yeah I read it all and dude...great rp..as always but **** me I don't have time to read an rp that size EVERY time you do one..not that I don't enjoy it,,,,
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Post by jlhfan69 on Jul 2, 2008 19:05:38 GMT -6
I hate you. Gah, you suck!
Just kidding.
Fantastic stuff. Then again, I marked for the last segment. Waking up Brad's daughter, you jackass... Promo stuff was great too.
Keep it up brah!
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Post by adm on Jul 2, 2008 20:10:41 GMT -6
Unfortunately for you, it was actually 7 pages when I copied and pasted it into Microsoft Word, but...****. You actually make me have to ****in work to beat you. I guess I am getting what I wanted, a ****in tough competitor who'll probably bury me in the dust.
But yes, your rp kicked ass...and probably is gonna take me a lot to figure my way around it.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 3, 2008 4:59:40 GMT -6
Unfortunatley? All it means is we have a different font size. It's not like it's a big deal or something.
But thank you, all for the compliments and such, I did work pretty hard on this.
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Post by Angel on Jul 4, 2008 23:19:43 GMT -6
Only because you asked, awesome role play man. Liked the bit at the end allot.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 5, 2008 7:08:35 GMT -6
New roleplay Good Enough For Me posted.
I felt this flowed quite well compared to the last one. And Prophet dude, the reason Spike has your promo on paper is because I printed yours off to read it whilst I was off doing other stuff. The lengths I go to....eh? lol.
Feedback appreciated.
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Post by jlhfan69 on Jul 5, 2008 12:13:28 GMT -6
More really great stuff brah. Promo was done well along with the Conrad stuff. Dialog was solid as always, nice touch with the kick to the face in the ring.
And I really loved how you set up the stuffed bear. I nearly had a tear fall down. Beautiful.
*Gentle golf clap*
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Post by adm on Jul 5, 2008 17:13:50 GMT -6
*bows to Spike in worship* what lengths indeed...You truly have proven, yet again, I'm still worse than you. Maybe in another 4 years I can try again.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 15, 2008 8:13:09 GMT -6
So...finally first ppv roleplay posted.
Who know's this could be one of Spike's last nCw PPV roleplays!!!
Thoughts on Written Off please?
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Post by jlhfan69 on Jul 15, 2008 9:37:03 GMT -6
Good stuff.
The opening promo was pretty good. Then the story section was really great. Then again, I might be a biased. The finishing promo section felt like it dragged a little bit. I'm just starting to not really care for the whole "..." throughout promos because a comma can just as effective. Regardless, this was pretty enjoyable. ****1/4
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Post by Adam on Jul 15, 2008 18:03:05 GMT -6
I liked it better the first time around...... in GWC.
-.-
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Post by Spike Kane on Oct 13, 2008 9:47:35 GMT -6
So figured I'd see if anybody would give me some for my rp I did last week
The Return.
Thanks in advance to anybody who does.
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Post by Spike Kane on Oct 15, 2008 16:09:10 GMT -6
My first rp post for my epic 1 on 1 with Lance. I didn't realise how big this match was untill earlier today...and I was like "damn this is our first one on one in almost a year!" got me to reading some of the stuff that went down...epic fued man, awesomeness.
So first rp: Hero of War/Call to Arms posted.
Thughts?
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Post by Brad Kane on Oct 15, 2008 17:10:21 GMT -6
Excellent RP. The story portion was well done, including the use of the mature Freya.
The promo/interview was good as well although not your best. Regardless, fantastic first RP for your match this week. Keep it up bro.
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Oct 16, 2008 6:27:00 GMT -6
Oh man that RP gave me some strange ideas for my next RP...stay tuned
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Post by Spike Kane on Oct 18, 2008 14:55:41 GMT -6
and up goes Those Who Fight pure trash talking this one, hints of character dev but...eh... I liked it myself.
Thoughts?
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Post by Spike Kane on Oct 30, 2008 16:05:12 GMT -6
I know I'm a dick for requesting feedback but the first of what I'm hoping to be an epic trilogy is up.
Thoughts on "Out of the frying pan"
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Post by theonly on Oct 30, 2008 16:10:21 GMT -6
*Epic jaw drop.* That is all.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Oct 30, 2008 17:38:24 GMT -6
*Head-desk* You know, I really hate you sometimes Spike
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Falcon
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Post by Falcon on Dec 7, 2008 8:26:56 GMT -6
Yay! The god of extreme is back... again..
I don't always post here that I love your stuff, but I do, and I do read it -.-
Still looking forward to facing you...
. . . . . <3
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Post by msjsn3 on Dec 7, 2008 8:43:00 GMT -6
HELL of a rp.
It makes me want to be right by your side tonight...
I thought about it after reading Nelly call to arms....but yours.....done it
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Post by Angel on Dec 7, 2008 8:43:49 GMT -6
Spike, I really enjoyed both of your rps this week. I don't know how you can possibly win this match, but I really hope you do because I think you really earned it. Seriously, great job and keep it up. Eventually we will face each other again and this is the Spike I wanna face.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jun 10, 2009 8:17:48 GMT -6
Man it feels good to be back here. After reading some of the things people have said in the past I can't believe I ever left this place. I just wanna thank everyone who has ever given me feedback, good or bad. You guys are the reason I still do this!
My first roleplay in this legit return is up: A Hymn of Humanity is posted. Not my greatest work by far but a roleplay I enjoyed writing and I hope you enjoy reading.
Thanks again nCw, it really warms my heart to be welcomed back so awesomely.
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Sucks to be you.
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Post by JFK on Jun 10, 2009 12:13:08 GMT -6
welcome back numbnuts
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Post by Alex Jones on Jun 12, 2009 14:38:20 GMT -6
needs more cowbell/10
But aside from that great work..welcome back dude
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Post by Chris Brock on Jun 12, 2009 14:46:34 GMT -6
Having never read your work before, I do think that you are a very talented writer. However, there are a couple things here.
1) I understand that this is not a real wrestling promotion and therefore some liberties can be taken in terms of gimmicks, but realitically no company would allow a gimmick where a guy is the leader of a cult and demanding the death of his oppoent on television. It's too far over the line and no network would allow that to air.
2.) Your gimmick is not realistic to me. Why are you a wrestler and not just a mass murderer? Why aren't you locked up in jail by now?
As I said, you are a very talented writer, and I enjoyed reading the story. I can definatly see why you are a hall of famer, but those were my only two criticisms. Great work. look forward to more in the future.
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Post by Alex Jones on Jun 14, 2009 0:02:24 GMT -6
Having never read your work before, I do think that you are a very talented writer. However, there are a couple things here. 1) I understand that this is not a real wrestling promotion and therefore some liberties can be taken in terms of gimmicks, but realitically no company would allow a gimmick where a guy is the leader of a cult and demanding the death of his oppoent on television. It's too far over the line and no network would allow that to air. 2.) Your gimmick is not realistic to me. Why are you a wrestler and not just a mass murderer? Why aren't you locked up in jail by now? As I said, you are a very talented writer, and I enjoyed reading the story. I can definatly see why you are a hall of famer, but those were my only two criticisms. Great work. look forward to more in the future. Yeah cause pro wrestling is a reality based product. After all you have deadmen walking around sacrificing people all the time....think about the undertakers entire career......they has taker "cut" dennix knight open on live TV and take out his heart....
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Post by Chris Brock on Jun 14, 2009 12:21:24 GMT -6
Yes, during the attitude era when the FCC allowed stuff like that. And even then, just because the WWE, a company that has been around since 1963, got away with it doesn't make it right or mean that the fans bought it. All I'm saying here is that I personaly feel it's unrealistic and being a fan or professional wrestling I don't buy it
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