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Post by tylerjacobs on Dec 11, 2007 15:59:56 GMT -6
Post all your feedback for Spike Kane roleplays here.
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Post by Spike Kane on Dec 12, 2007 10:50:05 GMT -6
First Metamorphosis roleplay posted "Heresy" it also contains a hype video promo for the ppv Main Event.
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Post by Steve Awesome on Dec 12, 2007 11:27:34 GMT -6
Awesome rp dude. I really liked it.
In fact the only feedback I can give you is that you missed a "H" in the word "the".
Other than that......it was perfect.
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Post by Davey Ortega on Dec 12, 2007 17:01:44 GMT -6
Man...I told you already...but brilliant.
Thank you...I think I can put my heart into my rps once more now.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jan 2, 2008 5:00:20 GMT -6
New developmental rp "God's Curse on You..." jjust posted.
I'd like some feedback as it's the first bit of writing I've done since before my surgery.
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Post by destroyyou555 on Jan 2, 2008 5:21:21 GMT -6
If that what your little brother has to look forward to...I feel for him.
I felt it was good and also did a good job of getting people to take X-tian seriously.
I don't mean nothing against Christian, he is really starting to come into his own and feel this rp helped developed a good story towards the match other then the whole brother v. brother deal.
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Post by msjsn3 on Jan 2, 2008 5:24:29 GMT -6
I thought it was an awesome rp....I to feel for Christian
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Post by Spike Kane on Jan 10, 2008 7:52:16 GMT -6
"A Crescendo!" posted.
What do you guys think?
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 10, 2008 8:04:54 GMT -6
Nice roleplay, the 4-man orchestra thing was surreal for a Spike Kane roleplay, but it worked.
Good job sir.
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Jan 10, 2008 8:12:41 GMT -6
It's been a while since I geniunely laughed at a rp... but man there was more than a few chuckles there. I was expecting some kind of metaphor for the title "A Crescendo"... but that was way better.
Let's see if Mark *half crescendo* can reply.
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The Ace
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Post by The Ace on Jan 10, 2008 8:20:29 GMT -6
I enjoyed it, and Nola made one of her rare appearances after all
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Post by Steve Awesome on Jan 10, 2008 11:52:58 GMT -6
Quite humerous my friend.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jan 17, 2008 17:48:33 GMT -6
New rp "Start A War" up.
I tried to go more with the speech then text this time, as I wanted it to feel rushed and emtional....hmm...lemme know what you guys think.
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Post by Dante Cross on Jan 17, 2008 19:22:36 GMT -6
Do you really want to know what I think?
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Post by tylerjacobs on Jan 18, 2008 6:15:25 GMT -6
I wouldn't have posted here if I didn't want feedback.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 18, 2008 6:55:54 GMT -6
It worked, I got slight chills as I read it, something that doesn't happen often when I read roleplays.
Short but sweet, classic Spike roleplay.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jan 18, 2008 8:02:07 GMT -6
New RP developmental, reply to Trent's reply, lol. i gotta say I felt on fire writing that. Trent's roleplay gave me so much to work with and to use...man, it felt awesome (Thanks Trent )
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 18, 2008 9:05:15 GMT -6
I wouldn't like to be Trent Helms right now lol.
I felt the anger in that roleplay dude, good work.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jan 22, 2008 20:19:14 GMT -6
The Odd Couple rp posted. My first off-board rp, and the first of my PPV rp's for Cross Roads. (Yes dont worry I had permission to use Milo and Terry ) Feedback would be gladly appreciated
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Post by msjsn3 on Jan 22, 2008 21:13:17 GMT -6
I thought it was good...I was not thinking Milo as your roomate. I was thinking Trent....just joking
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Post by Dante Cross on Jan 23, 2008 0:14:51 GMT -6
I find it funny, that Spike and Trent in another fed are teaming together for a match...Irony
It was good. Didn't like it as much as your usual stuff, but still great. 8.5/10
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Post by The Brothers Holland on Jan 23, 2008 4:19:07 GMT -6
The scary thing is that I could see that wasn't Milo anymore... that was actually me. The scary part is that you know me that damn well.
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Jack Manson
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Post by Jack Manson on Jan 31, 2008 14:54:50 GMT -6
Nice roleplay Spike, a good read. I'm loving the Spike and Milo part of your roleplays, it's just appeared out of nowhere, it makes a nice change lol. And I thought Spikes anguish at the start of it was a nice touch, I was expecting a big speech on how much better you are than Christian, so it was a pleasant suprise to see the opposite. There's no big feedback to give except you mentioned in one paragraph the people you had beaten to get where you are now, and then in the next paragraph you wrote it all again with a bit more background info to it. I think you could of just added the background to some of the matches when you first mentioned it. But that's just a minor thing because you were in the middle of talking about them in two different approaches. One about what you will do to keep it, and then telling Angel why you're the champion. Other than that small thing it was a damn good read Keep it up mate.
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Post by msjsn3 on Jan 31, 2008 14:56:32 GMT -6
I agree with Jack Manson a damn good read
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Post by Spike Kane on Jan 31, 2008 14:57:39 GMT -6
thanks for the critiq dude, always welcomed
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Post by Spike Kane on Feb 2, 2008 21:17:52 GMT -6
second Collision rp up.
Little rushed, i never usually post this close to deadline.
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Post by Spike Kane on Feb 7, 2008 17:19:39 GMT -6
"Advantage: Spike" posted.
Feedback appreciated
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Post by Xavier Williams on Feb 7, 2008 19:14:10 GMT -6
To see the mental picture of Spike standing there, like a little kid, who didnt get a Wii... left out of the fold, very funny.
But Content Wise, I enjoy'd it.
I'd say keep up the good work, but you're champion soooooo.....*plays Devil May Cry 4*
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Post by Spike Kane on Feb 8, 2008 17:41:44 GMT -6
Second Collision rp posted: "Ignorance is stupidity"
I'd like to point out that not one of my "cheap shots" at The Ace were OOC. The talking of the card was mentioned as it had been mentioned in somebody else's rp earlier this week.
Comments appreciated
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Post by adm on Feb 10, 2008 0:29:59 GMT -6
Your first rp for the week was fully fleshed out and worked well. The second one seemed a bit less strong, maybe because it was rather brief and directly to the point, instead of having a bit of other things going on. All in all it's good stuff, definitely proving you deserve being the World Champ.
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