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Post by Cliff Clinton on Jun 14, 2009 13:56:51 GMT -6
.....Okay......
Don't buy it then.
I personally enjoyed it Spike. Good work.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jun 14, 2009 14:17:45 GMT -6
Having never read your work before, I do think that you are a very talented writer. However, there are a couple things here. 1) I understand that this is not a real wrestling promotion and therefore some liberties can be taken in terms of gimmicks, but realitically no company would allow a gimmick where a guy is the leader of a cult and demanding the death of his oppoent on television. It's too far over the line and no network would allow that to air. 2.) Your gimmick is not realistic to me. Why are you a wrestler and not just a mass murderer? Why aren't you locked up in jail by now? As I said, you are a very talented writer, and I enjoyed reading the story. I can definatly see why you are a hall of famer, but those were my only two criticisms. Great work. look forward to more in the future. Dude no problemo man. There is a lot of history that goes along with Spike' story, and it's so messed up that sometimes I even forget it. All you need to know is that Spike has been in a mental asylum on more than one occasion, but some very powerful and very rich people keep him out of there. It's not meant to sell as a gimmick, more that Spike is truly messed up. The angle I did just as I was leaving showed Spike falling into insanity and he pretty much hasn;t recovered. This is too Russo-rific that I have to explain the backstory, I know, but hey....it's a game and I'm enjoying this direction thats all that matters. According to some members of this roster the "HoF" Spike Kane is dead lol. I'm just back to have some fun, maybe reach the top once more but I appreciate your honesty and your feedback. If you ever want the full low down just ask amigo
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Post by Jabari Woodhead on Jun 14, 2009 15:10:39 GMT -6
chris his isn't really that bad. you want messed go to Collision rps page 16. Mark Evil rp from September 29th
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Post by adm on Jun 14, 2009 16:25:40 GMT -6
Or if you want really bad go to...what ep of Collision/Trauma did Fate go to Necrophiliacs anonymous and **** that corpse in a closet? yeah...I've done worse than Spike...on more than one occasion.
And as far as your latest rp...you seem to have some rust from the "other places" you've been...hopefully you shake that minimal rust off quickly, cuz you could kick some serious ass if you take Falcon to his limit when the feud culminates, cuz he's one of the best we got these days...up there with AJ, Ed(Angel) and Adam.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jun 15, 2009 4:14:36 GMT -6
Thanks man
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Post by Chris Brock on Jun 15, 2009 19:34:26 GMT -6
Ok, so with just that little bit of back story it makes a lot more sense now.. As I said, I had never read your stuff before, so I could only go off of that one piece.. The whole piece makes a LOT more sense now.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jun 16, 2009 6:48:15 GMT -6
It's understandable dude Spike's been a work in progress since mid-1996.
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Post by Chris Brock on Jun 16, 2009 11:35:34 GMT -6
I can understand that... I've been working with Brock since just about 1998-ish
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jul 16, 2009 9:55:39 GMT -6
Pretty good RP, brother. A little short by usual Spike Kane standards...but that was welcome Anyway...I am sure Mac and Gibby will have plenty to go on now!! I think it should be a tough matchup
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Post by adm on Jul 16, 2009 11:01:47 GMT -6
Pretty good RP, brother. A little short by usual Spike Kane standards...but that was welcome Anyway...I am sure Mac and Gibby will have plenty to go on now!! I think it should be a tough matchup Indeed, good, but shorter is INDEED a bit better...now lead by example...I'm TRYING to...lol *breaks out the walker* cuz us old farts need to help the youngins...all of em
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 17, 2009 17:01:52 GMT -6
Got my second rp of the week up, this one is a bit longer because I put some romance in their especially for Jeff. It's leading somewhere eventually, first bit of CD involved since I came back.
So thoughts, opnions on my rps and general direction right now? (p.s. thanks for the feedback above guys)
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Post by disdonn on Jul 17, 2009 18:35:19 GMT -6
woot romance! lol Anyway, it was another solid one. I kinda like the stuff with his wife lol...gives a slight look into how he's not as crazy as you made him out to be when you first came back...which is good. too many loonies out there with Kole back...
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Post by scab on Jul 17, 2009 18:53:38 GMT -6
I am working on catching myself up with the rps here in nCw. I found this latest Spike Kane rp very entertaining and very interesting. Several excellent points were made in the rp...one that really jumped off at me and should be the quote of the week this week....
GREATEST QUOTE EVER!!! Great job Spike, glad to see you back in solid form.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 18, 2009 4:45:24 GMT -6
Thanks guys. Yeah DP I'm trying to calm Spike down a little, outside the ring anyway.
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Post by Daredevil on Jul 25, 2009 17:13:28 GMT -6
Hey man that RP was awesome the way you figured away of putting that banner in and it was an enjoyable and easy read....Good Work Mr Kane.
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Post by adm on Jul 25, 2009 18:49:42 GMT -6
the beginning lyrics kinda confused me just a little...
The rp was pretty solid, a little long...but solid. The end coulda been cut before the door knock, to be honest and the rp would have still had the same effect.
Side Note/Grammar Nazi: Uh...sorry but making ends MEAT is not...going to beat the Everyman quote about Spit...just not gonna work.
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Post by Maniac on Jul 25, 2009 19:44:03 GMT -6
I really enjoyed the second one, it felt like the Spike of old with a new shine on it, making him that much more dangerous.
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jul 25, 2009 22:28:06 GMT -6
I think both RPs this week were very solid, just like the Spike of olde, but...how dare you use my banner against me!
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 26, 2009 8:02:30 GMT -6
Thanks guys. I felt the roleplays came to me a lot easier this week, so that can only be a good sign.
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Post by Spike Kane on Jul 27, 2009 19:30:58 GMT -6
First rp for The Anniversary up.
Just wanna say, really enjoyed writing this roleplay and to the admins all the stuff Spike says is IC ok? :-p
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Post by scab on Jul 27, 2009 20:00:24 GMT -6
I really enjoyed this rp, you almost have to make Spike Kane be a prick this week against your rival. So the calming down from last week and the weeks before will have to be set aside for this week. The Road to the Gold Tournament reference is good, helps to hype the event up. The thought of Falcon vs. Spike as the finals is incredible, there are A LOT of possibilities in the tournament that would make for an INCREDIBLE ending though. It is going to be a bloody match between Spike and Dark Prophet, just hope he's got a great reply to REALLY make this match great. Another great Spike Kane rp and looking forward to your next one. Who will have "fallen" next to Spike? Dark Prophet?
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Post by Joe Everyman on Jul 27, 2009 22:14:18 GMT -6
First rp for The Anniversary up. Just wanna say, really enjoyed writing this roleplay and to the admins all the stuff Spike says is IC ok? :-p That's why IC stuff is fun RPs like this are the reason I love reading your work every week. Good job this week, now just drive it home.
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Jul 29, 2009 12:24:38 GMT -6
I enjoyed the rp alot and I personally think you should keep the 'All Bloody Hail' as a cool motto for Spike as it fits him and gives him a King of Kings feel, but I'm a Triple H fan so I would enjoy that...
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Post by Cyrus Daniels on Aug 6, 2009 17:40:55 GMT -6
I really enjoyed your latest my friend, particually the bit where you alluded to Zell blessing Xander, that was a nice touch and a side of Spike we rarely see...
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Aug 6, 2009 17:51:33 GMT -6
I really liked it.....great CD....Spike is my hero!
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Post by adm on Aug 6, 2009 17:58:27 GMT -6
nice rp Spike, a little bit of CD and a little bit of promo...nice blend.
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Post by Brad Kane on Aug 6, 2009 18:20:59 GMT -6
Lol, Spike going to the gravesite to see Zell. Where have I seen that done before. The promo, on the other hand, was pretty good. Then again I'm getting back into reading things so I honestly have no idea how this compares so some of your other work lately. Good job either way.
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Post by adm on Aug 7, 2009 17:24:30 GMT -6
the 2nd one practically made me jizz my pants...reminds me of the stuff you pulled when you were champ, and when you beat my ass last year. Some of your best work in recent memory for sure on the 2nd, kinda cocky, but...it fits and it fits well.
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Post by Spike Kane on Sept 12, 2009 16:23:29 GMT -6
Some feedback on my ppv rps would be super awesome, aswell as general feedback of Spike and his current arc.
Any takers?
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Post by Will Washington on Sept 21, 2009 16:11:29 GMT -6
Man, I loved the RP. It was a great idea to set it where you did also. Good read.
You don't even realize how worried I am about you. If I'm gonna win this tournament, I'll have to face you in the finals probably. Not looking forward to it.
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