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Post by Spike Kane on Feb 11, 2010 8:10:08 GMT -6
Again good read Wil. You've clearly bout a lot of thought and effort into this storyline you've got going and you've always been able to pull trash-talking out of thin air, even if it does always end with a corny catchphrase, or twelve :-p
and...OMG!?!? PLOT TWISTZZZZZZZ!
Who do you think you are, a Kane?
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Feb 24, 2010 15:23:59 GMT -6
Speaking of Plot Twists....
First PPV RP is posted!!!
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments? All are welcome!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 4, 2010 17:13:25 GMT -6
RP posted for this week..
Thoughts Suggestions Comments and other non coherent ramblings are accepted!
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Post by disdonn on Mar 4, 2010 18:40:16 GMT -6
I can't help but laugh at the sly joke about the Grammar Nazi stuff...good job sir, we're winnin, we're winnin!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 8, 2010 19:41:07 GMT -6
First RP of the week is posted....
As Always...thoughts, Suggestions and comments are always welcome!
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Post by Leonard Fox on Mar 8, 2010 19:47:30 GMT -6
Wasn't bad.
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Post by disdonn on Mar 8, 2010 20:01:09 GMT -6
Twas a little long, but there was a lot with the faction to cover from Collision. Other than the slight length thing, it was pretty good. Let's take this Colliseum over!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 19, 2010 16:20:19 GMT -6
Roleplay Posted....
Thoughts...Suggestions...and comments are always welcome!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 23, 2010 12:55:12 GMT -6
First Sovereign RP is up.
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments?
Wil
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Post by disdonn on Mar 23, 2010 17:04:59 GMT -6
Our solidarity is strong, Wil-San. Tis another great rp, we shall overcome, we shall...win.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 24, 2010 15:36:40 GMT -6
"Promises! Promises!" posted. 2nd PPV Rp is up..
Thoughts! Suggestions! Comments!
FEED MY BACK!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 27, 2010 17:32:42 GMT -6
Last and final RP for Sovereign posted..
"CSI: TAMPA"
I know it's long, but it's a good read!!
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments?
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Post by adm on Mar 27, 2010 18:54:18 GMT -6
Was a pretty damn awesome rp...and I think all of our opponents will take notice of the crazy Zane.
Good job bro, good luck to us and all the rest when it comes to this PPV.
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Post by Mike Machado on Mar 29, 2010 0:49:02 GMT -6
Thought your stuff was brilliant this week.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Mar 29, 2010 18:29:26 GMT -6
Thanks, Mike....
First and only RP of the week posted.
"BROKEN"
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments?
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Apr 17, 2010 9:39:58 GMT -6
I finally got my RP posted for this week. Sorry it was so close to the deadline. It was a week from hell at work! Anyway.... Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments?
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Apr 20, 2010 11:50:13 GMT -6
Only RP for the week posted.
"DRIVING FORCE"
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments?
All are always appreciated!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Apr 28, 2010 18:16:07 GMT -6
First and Only PPV RP is up...
"CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW"....
Thoughts? Comments? Backfeeding?
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Post by Jimmy Zane on May 23, 2011 10:53:56 GMT -6
First Roleplay back here in nCw is posted! As always...
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments? All are welcome!
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Post by Jimmy Zane on May 27, 2011 12:38:29 GMT -6
2nd and final RP of the week is up! Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments? Always appreciated!!
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Post by Alex Jones on May 28, 2011 17:40:45 GMT -6
Great return rps man...I wanted to kind of push as to why jimmy zane left and question his commitment and everything and not only did you take it all but you switched it on me..great work Wil
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Post by Cliff Clinton on May 28, 2011 23:00:32 GMT -6
Protip: Commenting on the size of my penis is an automatic win!
No, but seriously, glad your back man. Always dig your work homeslice.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on May 30, 2011 8:05:07 GMT -6
Thanks guys!
"Midnight Train to London" posted....
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments?
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Post by Spike Kane on Jun 1, 2011 16:37:42 GMT -6
Besides the steretypical bullsh*t, it was a very decent roleplay. The length was good because it didn't have a chance to get stale and it was just wacky enough to make me want to read more.
I do think that you over use capital letters though, I know it's kind of your style but it's really distracting. A word or two is fine but a whole sentance is weird.
Keep it up holmes.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jun 3, 2011 23:55:05 GMT -6
Last RP for the week "Progressions (Episode 1)" is posted. About to embark on a wild ride. Hope you guys enjoy it!
Wil
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jun 8, 2011 5:49:10 GMT -6
First and only RP of the week is posted!!
"Bloodlines (Episode 2)"
Thoughts? Suggestions? Comments?
All are appreciated!
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Post by doc on Jun 8, 2011 7:06:57 GMT -6
Good job - even though (I think) I know where the angle is going, I'm enjoying reading throught it.
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Post by adm on Jun 8, 2011 8:15:40 GMT -6
I liked the rp, though I do have one problem with it, and coming from me, that may sound like a dumb problem. I feel, personally, the CD was a bit overdone, and that it could have been stretched out longer (build suspense and all that jazz). Mostly, because this is only the 2nd rp in this line, and with next eek you'll probably do another 2 more with the storyline in it, you may rush through and be done with this arc before the PPV.
The rp was awesome, and I get this feeling (oddly) of some old vampire from DarkShadows from the guy he's talking to. Nice rp all around, just the one insignificant gripe.
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Post by Jimmy Zane on Jun 8, 2011 8:41:42 GMT -6
Actually, the plan for next week is to do a bit more of the CD. I think a lot of it will play itself out, but the way I have it "scheduled" or broken down, it should take about 4 weeks for all the info to be on the table, but another 4-5 weeks for the rest.... Thanks guys!!
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Post by doc on Jun 8, 2011 8:53:50 GMT -6
I know what Bates is saying. Just be careful when it comes to "fleshing things out". If I had to edit your rp I'd probably cut out a little of the dialogue fom the CD part just to make sure there's no repitition there, because I believe there is a balance between building suspense in the long term and making the present event memorable and punchy (ie. have a point to make, make it, and get out). With that said, unless you have a twist in the tail already planned, maybe I shouldn't be able to guess how things are beginning to play out at this stage (Bates point about building suspense over the weeks). But it all depends on how you have things planned and where you take the storyline from here.
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